One sunny day, Alex, a young boy, was walking home from school when he noticed something unusual. A small, scruffy (邋遢的) dog was sitting alone by the side of the road, its eyes full of fear and confusion. The poor dog looked lost and hungry. Alex felt a sense of empathy(同情)in his heart as he walked towards the dog slowly, offering it a piece of his sandwich.
The moment the dog cautiously took the food from his hand, Alex’s heart melted. He could see that the dog was alone and scared, and he knew he couldn’t just leave it there. Without a second thought, Alex decided to take the dog home. He carefully hid the dog in the garage(车库), hoping his father wouldn’t find out.
For days, Alex spent all his spare time in the garage, playing with the dog. He named the dog Max, and they quickly became close friends. Their connection grew stronger day by day as they shared countless adventures together. Max brought so much joy into Alex’s life.
One day, Alex’s father discovered their secret. He was surprised and told the boy to put Max back on the street, thinking it was for the best. With a heavy heart, Alex did as he was told. He left Max at the park, hoping that someone else would find him and give him a loving home. But as he walked away, his heart ached with sadness, tears welling up in his eyes.
Alex was heartbroken. He missed Max terribly and found it hard to focus on anything else. His grades started to slip (下滑), and he became quiet and silent. His usual happiness had disappeared, replaced(取代) by deep sadness that seemed to swallow(吞没) him whole. Seeing this, his father realized how much Max meant to Alex.
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Para.1
Then his father decided to bring Max back.
Para.2
The boy took full responsibility for Max.
小男孩Alex在放学路上看到一只邋遢的小狗,心生同情,给小狗一块三明治后,决定把小狗带回,藏在车库里。他们很快成为了好朋友。然而,父亲发现了这个秘密后,要求放回小狗。Alex 虽不情愿但照做了,他伤心不已,成绩下滑。父亲看到Alex的变化后意识到了小狗对他的重要性。
情节1:寻Max(去哪寻,是否寻到狗?)
情节2:找到Max,将Max带回
情节3: Alex与Max重逢
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Para.2 The boy took full responsibility for Max.
情节1: 照顾Max(如何照顾:喂养?陪伴?)
情节2:Alex的变化(情绪转变?成绩转变?)
情节3:人狗之情变化,作何感想
三、提炼原文句式,协同语言风格
(一)情绪描写
1. A small, scruffy (邋遢的) dog was sitting alone by the side of the road, its eyes full of fear and confusion.
句型1:Sb. did sth., one's eyes full of+情绪名词
2. Alex felt a sense of empathy (同情) in his heart as he walked towards the dog slowly, offering it a piece of his sandwich.
句型2:sb. felt a sense of+情绪名词 in one’s heart as sb. did sth., doing sth.
3. The moment the dog cautiously took the food from his hand, Alex’s heart melted.
句型3:The moment sb. did sth., one’s heart melted(融化了)/ached(心痛)/sank(沉下来)/raced(加速).
4. But as he walked away, his heart ached with sadness, tears welling up in his eyes.
句型4:As sb. did sth., one’s heart ached with sadness, tears welling up in one’s eyes.
5.With a heavy heart, Alex did as he was told.
句型5:With a(n)+形+heart, sb. did sth.
6.His usual happiness had disappeared, replaced (取代) by deep sadness that seemed to swallow (吞没) him whole.
句型6:
1) One’s usual+积极情绪名词1 had disappeared, replaced by +消极情绪名词2 +that seemed to swallow/consume(消耗) sb. whole.
2) One’s usual+消极情绪名词1 had disappeared, replaced by +积极情绪名词2 +that surrounded/inspired/warmed sb./cheered sb up.
(二) 如何表达“毫不犹豫”
7.Without a second thought, Alex decided to take the dog home.
句型7:Without a second thought/ Without hesitation, sb. did sth.
(三) 非谓语
8.He carefully hid the dog in the garage (车库), hoping his father wouldn’t find out.
He left Max at the park, hoping that someone else would find him and give him a loving home.
句型8:sb. did sth., hoping that 从句
9. Seeing this, his father realized how much Max meant to Alex.
句型9:seeing sb./sth., sb. realized how much sb./sth. meant to sb.
seeing(At the sight of )sb./sth., sb. did sth.
四、依托原文句式,再续故事情节
句型1/句型4/句型7:描述his father找Max的过程
1.一开始,他没有找到Max,他眼里充满了担心和不安。
2.他看到Max时,他眼里充满了喜悦和激动之情。
3.然而,当他慢慢靠近Max时,他心疼得后悔不已(regret),泪水从眼里涌出。
4.毫不犹豫,他轻轻地将Max抱起来,带回家。
句型2:描述Alex再次见到Max
5.当Alex看到Max,把它抱起来,抚摸它柔软的毛,Alex心中感到一股暖意。
句型3:描写his father见到Alex和Max重逢场面
6.看到Alex和Max相拥一起的那一刻,他爸爸的心融化了。
句型5、句型8:描述Alex如何照顾Max
7.怀着一颗愉快之心,Alex努力照顾好Max,给它足够的关注和关心。
8.他每天陪着Max,与它玩耍,希望给它一个温暖的家/希望他能弥补(make up for)他缺席的日子。
句型6:描述Alex的变化
9.从那时起,他之前的伤心和担心都消失不见了,取而代之的是幸福和满足,包围着他。
句型9:描述感悟
10.看到Alex的变化,他父亲明白了有时候动物带来的温暖和安慰比任何东西都重要
五、参考表达
1.At the beginning, he didn’t find Max, his eyes full worry and anxiety.
2.He saw Max, his eyes full of joy and excitement.
3.But as he approached Max slowly, his heart ached with regret, tears welling up in his eyes.
4. Without a second thought, he gently picked Max up, bringing it home.
5. Alex felt a sense of warmth in his heart as he saw Max, picking it up and stroking its soft fur.
6. The moment Alex and Max hugged with each other, his father’s heart melted.
7. With a joyful heart, Alex made an effort to take care of Max, offering it enough attention and concern.
8. He kept Max company every day and played with it, hoping to give it a warm home/hoping to make up for his absence during those days.
9. Since then, his usual(previous) sadness and worry had disappeared, replaced by happiness and satisfaction that surrounded him.
10. Seeing Alex’s changes, his father realized that sometimes the warmth and comfort brought by animals were more important than anything.
六、参考范文
Para.1 Then his father decided to bring Max back. He went to the park where Alex had left Max, calling out the dog's name in the hope of finding him. After hours of searching, the father spotted a scruffy figure darting through the trees. It was Max! The father carefully approached the trembling dog, offering gentle words and a piece of meat he'd brought along. Slowly, Max inched closer, his tail wagging weakly but hopefully. The father knew he had to make things right. He carried Max home, his heart heavy with guilt but also determination to give the dog a proper chance. When they arrived home, Alex was overjoyed to see Max back. The boy threw his arms around the dog, tears of happiness streaming down his face. The father sighed with relief, realizing how much Max truly meant to his son.
Para.2 The boy took full responsibility for Max. He created a cozy corner in his room for Max, complete with a soft bed and toys. Every day, Alex took Max for walks, exploring the neighborhood together. He saved his money to buy Max nutritious food and a sturdy collar. During weekends, they played fetch in the park, their laughter echoing across the grass. Alex's grades began to improve as his happiness returned, and he even started a school project on animal welfare. The bond between Alex and Max grew stronger, becoming a source of joy for the entire family. The father, seeing the positive change in Alex, smiled knowingly. What had started as a secret friendship had blossomed into a valuable lesson about love, responsibility, and the unbreakable connection between a boy and his dog.
