读后续写干货|情节推进四大黄金法则

考场上，读后续写总是卡壳、故事不会衔接，怎么破？在高考读后续写题型中，除了具备故事衔接，丰富描写外，同学们还要合理运用情节推进句式才能让故事过渡自然、逻辑连贯。以下情节推进黄金句式，3秒丝滑衔接剧情，让故事像追剧一样上头！

一.时间推进法——氛围感拉满

1. Night fell before they knew it, covering‌ their path in darkness.（不知不觉夜幕降临，黑暗笼罩了他们的路。）

2.With the dawn breaking, they felt hope again.（随着黎明破晓，希望在他们心中重新燃起。）

3.As the final bell echoed through the hallway, panic surged through her veins.（当最后一声铃声在走廊回荡，她的心头涌起一阵恐慌。）

4..Hours slipped away like sand, and the rising tide threatened to swallow their only raft.（时间如流沙般飞逝，上涨的潮水眼看就要吞没他们唯一的木筏。）

5.On/when hearing of the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he froze with his mouth wide open.当听说了这个意外的消息，他张大了嘴巴，惊呆了。

6. Suddenly/ All of a sudden, she spotted a huge flat rock and managed to climb onto it. 突然,他发现了一个扁平的大石头设法爬了上去。

7. No sooner had he caught sight of the rope than he grabbed it hurriedly.他一看见绳子就匆忙抓住了它。

8. I was walking along the river when I heard someone calling for help.我正沿着河边散步这时我突然听到有人呼救。

9.As time goes by, I come to realize that hard work pays off and love can break down the barriers. 随着时间的流逝,我逐渐认识到付出总有回报。

10.With the deadline getting closer, a sense of desperation began to spread among everyone. 随着截止日期步步逼近，绝望的情绪开始蔓延。

二.动作衔接法——画面感炸裂

1.Hearing the ring bell, students jumped to their feet and dashed towards canteen. 听到下课铃声，同学们跳起来，冲向了餐厅。

2.Larry pulled over, set the brake and got hold of the fire extinguisher(灭火器)。拉里靠边停车， 踩下刹车， 拿起灭火器。

3.With tears welling up in my eyes, I rushed out of the flat and ran along the street.眼睛里噙满了泪水，我冲出公寓沿街跑着。

4.With a battle cry, the villagers charged forward, torches illuminating their determined faces.（村民们呐喊着冲锋，火把照亮了他们坚毅的脸庞。）

5.Caught in the middle of the argument, he flushed with embarrassment and quickly ducked his head, trying to make himself as inconspicuous as possible.在争论中被逮个正着，他满脸通红，迅速低下头，试图让自己尽可能不显眼。

6. Seeing his figure, she rushed to him with excitement and fell into his arms. 一看见他的身影她就兴奋地冲了过去扑进他的怀里。

7.Looking around cautiously，my seven-year-old son slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window. 小心的环顾了一下四周，我七岁的儿子溜下了床踮着脚走到窗户前。

8. She dashed forward, knelt down and gathered her son into her arms.她冲上前去,跪下来,一把将儿子抱在怀里。

9.The coach stepped forward, patted him on the shoulder, and encouraged him never to give up on his dreams. 他向前迈了一步,拍了拍他的肩膀并鼓励他永远不要放弃梦想。

10.The children walked hand in hand, chatting merrily and laughing at each other's jokes.（孩子们手拉手走着，愉快地聊着天，被彼此的笑话逗得哈哈大笑。）

三.因果关系法——逻辑链锁死

1.The icy rain turned the path into a slippery nightmare, causing her to lose her footing and fall down the slope.（冰冷的雨水让山路变得泥泞不堪，她脚下一滑，顺着斜坡滚了下去。）

2.His unexpected apology made her less angry, paving the way for a long-overdue reconciliation.（他突如其来的道歉化解了她的怒火，为迟来的和解埋下伏笔。）

3.The broken radio cut off their communication, leaving them at the mercy of the approaching storm.（收音机的损坏切断了他们的联络，让他们只能直面即将来临的风暴。）

4.It was so dark that they could barely make out the path ahead, and thus got lost in the forest.（天太黑了，他们几乎看不清前面的路，因此在森林里迷路了。）

5.Her kind words melted his heart, leading him to abandon his original plan of revenge.（她温暖的话语融化了他的心，使他放弃了最初的复仇计划。）

6.Due to the heavy rain, the old bridge collapsed, cutting off their only escape route.（由于大雨，旧桥坍塌了，切断了他们唯一的逃生路线。）

7.She felt so angry that she stormed out of the room, slamming the door. 她如此生气以至于一阵风似的冲出房间,重重地摔上门。

8.With a lot of difficult problems to settle, the newly promoted manager is facing a great challenge. 由于有许多难题需要解决,新当选的经理面临着巨大的挑战。

9.Her constant practice was the reason why she could perform so flawlessly on the stage.（她坚持不懈的练习是她能在舞台上完美表演的原因。）

10.The unexpected cancellation of the flight resulted in a chain reaction of missed connections and frustrated passengers.（航班的意外取消引发了一系列连锁反应，导致乘客们错过转机，十分沮丧。）

四.转折铺垫法——反转王中王

1.Just as they reached the summit, a gust of wind snatched the map right out of their hands.（就在他们抵达山顶时，一阵狂风突然卷走了手中的地图。）

2.She finally found the hidden key, only to discover it opened a door she never wanted to enter.（她终于找到了那把钥匙，却发现它打开的是一扇她最不愿面对的门。）

3.Just as they thought they had solved the problem, a new and unexpected challenge emerged.（就在他们以为已经解决问题时，一个新的意外挑战出现了。）

4.Little did they know that their seemingly harmless decision would trigger a series of disastrous consequences.（他们全然不知，自己这个看似无害的决定会引发一系列灾难性的后果。 ）

5.Everything seemed to be going smoothly; however, fate had other plans.（一切似乎都进展顺利；然而，命运另有安排。）

6.Weak as he was, he still struggled to his feet.尽管很虚弱,他仍挣扎着站了起来。

7.Their journey seemed to be going smoothly until a strange noise from the engine shattered their peace.（他们的旅程似乎一切顺利，直到引擎传来的奇怪声音打破了平静。）

8.Just when they thought they had found the perfect solution, a new and unforeseen obstacle emerged.（就在他们以为找到了完美的解决方案时，一个始料未及的新障碍出现了。）

9.They were on the verge of victory when a sudden change in the weather turned the situation around completely.（他们即将胜利之际，天气的突然变化彻底扭转了局势。）

10.From initial disbelief to overwhelming joy, her emotions were on a rollercoaster ride.（从最初的难以置信到极度的喜悦，她的情绪就像坐过山车一样起伏不定。）

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